FTSY 1311.06 Fall 2006

A blog of the weekly commentaries of the members of FTSY 1311.06, Rhetoric and Composition I at St. Edward's University, Fall 2006.

17 October 2006

Just in time, they turned off the lights and quieted down. Everyone thought his surprise would be ruined because of the commotion that had erupted when it was discovered that he had arrived prematurely. But luckily, someone had turned off the lights and the room grew still. The door creaked open, and there was a pause of silence. Then all of a sudden, as if on cue, everyone yelled, “Surprise!” Everyone, that is, except for the caterers and other service people who had not been informed that it was not a birthday party. Those “happy birthdays” went almost unheard, but the guest of honor noticed them immediately, and it made him chuckle. A giant grin spread across his beaming red face as he began to greet the guests. What none of them knew was that he had already known. He had known for weeks. Things just can’t be kept secret in this company, he had thought, when he saw one of the invite letters in the trash. But they didn’t need to know, and he wasn’t going to be the one to bring their spirits down. One by one, he thanked and embraced his colleagues and friends, making his way to the front of the room. As he did so, the heat of the room began to get to him, and beads of sweat began to trickle down his neck. Finally, he reached the front table, and stepped behind the microphone. With his friends ushering him on, he began to give his speech. But as he did so, he began to feel a sharp pain in his chest.

1 Comments:

  • At October 17, 2006 4:17 PM, Blogger mattm said…

    Cool story, it's got a suspenseful feeling to it that starts off like everything will be okay but then at the end, his walk up to the microphone turns everything upside again. It's kind of funny how a lot of these stories we wrote ended in a way that was building up and then left you hanging. But it's funny how the guy in the story has to give this speech about his "surprise" party, and he is going to have to act like he is actually surprised in front of his closest friends and relatives. You can almost tell that its going to end in a bad way. I'm curious as to whether or not he will spill the beans and confess he has known about the party or try to cover up his feelings and lie to everyone. I guess it wouldn't be too harsh of a lie but it would be interesting to see if he went through with it.

     

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